Monday, March 8, 2010

My first piece with you all

Okay, so since I can't think much of what to write today I'll just give you all a little sample of my spoken word poetry. Hope you all like it :)

title - Can I have the job?

I want the job. The job for your heart. The art of love the

masterpiece I plan to make you my Sistine chapel, I just want to have

you make you mine, this job one of a kind, so in time I'll prove

myself. I want the job already got myself through the orientation,

showed you my patience, no compensation is necessary, your happiness

is my payment, but Already stated the introductory lines and

statements now on to the work. But for what it's worth I've never felt

this type of feeling, the urge to receive this only verbs can achieve

it so I'll prove it, love can make you do foolish things but in the

long run is worth it, my purpose to make you happy make it my job, I

want this. I need this. I need you. You who differentiate among the

rest, unique in countless ways a fresh breathe, never before until now

am I ready to take the next step. Love what you represent the

challenge given to me much more difficult than the others, the rest

just numbers, not even lovers, all I want to eventually say is I love

her, my job to caress nurture and hug her, bug her for more kisses

because I simply can't get enough work I love this job. You make me

feel both weak and strong at the same time. Weak like a boy with his

first crush strong as you make my muscles tight, this incredible

feeling like penguins love at first sight just feels so right and so

great my other half my soulmate so I need this job. Everytime we meet,

you give me a heart mur mur my heart skips a beat. But it's all just

the beginning already blushing and grinning as if it's my first crush,

I don't mean to rush because this job lasts a lifetime. There's always

a way to that specials persons heart you just need the right rhyme to

get their attention not to mention the hard work. So here I am at your

door step knocking, your heart pounding and rocking just like mine.

You open the door slowly as you turn the door knob, I'm here at your

door step for you forever and always……can I have the job?

3 comments:

  1. omgggggggg
    idk how no one commented this, this is so profound and beautiful
    i loved it!!!!!
    sorry if i seem so excited but i write poetry and i love free-hand writing on blogs thats different and meaningful :)

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  2. Wow Jay, I love this poem. It's what most men who are in true love feel and what most girls in love want to hear. Brave and insightful. -Corin

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  3. :) goshers thanks guysss I appreciate it

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